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Ash

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Alright, alright. I know I never upload NSFW (or in this case, NSFW-ish) content on this dA account.

But this is a special case, for there are many reasons.

1. I was thinking about making this... Rather feminine person as my new dA ID, but I want to have your opinion on this.

2. I have tried new techniques in GIMP, and spent a lot of time on this piece that I'm really proud of.
I need you to analyze it and tell me what's better, what's worse, what you like and what you don't, and if I have improved overall.

3. DEM EYES

So don't go rambling around about the fact that I uploaded a very close to nude character with an ambiguous gender.
Besides I've already done worse.

Other than all that jazz, this character is named Ash.
He possesses very strong psychic abilities, such as telekinesis, very strong mind influence, causing hallucinations to others, and doing things like this and this, and sometimes can't control them, which is why he's always scared of other people making contact with him (ranging from eye contact to physical contact), for he doesn't want to hurt them.
He was kept by another secret organization for research on extranormal event for quite a while, before escaping.
No traces of him have been found since.
He's extremely shy, anxious and girly (could be mistaken for a girl, in fact). He constantly wears these clothes, and doesn't feel cold or hot temperatures. The organization which contained him let him be in these, because if he was not he would be stressed, and incidents would occur more often, resulting in the deaths of many personnel each time.

He's not from the 240th System.

That's all.

I hope you'll like it even if NSFW-ish, and remember, I want you to critique this thing please. c:
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gdpr-23338774's avatar
I love it, but for the lights I think you should blend/smudge(~etaler) it more, and maybe less width for the lines(~traits)